Your Story Start To Finish
April 23-25, 2021 Michigan SCBWI hosted a virtual conference “Your Story Start To Finish”. It was a high-quality conference full of valuable content (I wrote about 60 pages of notes!). Over the past couple of weeks, I have tried to apply some of the tips to my writing and it has been very helpful.
In a similar format to my summary of the things I learned at the SCBWI Summer Spectacular last year, I am going to share my top five takeaways.
#1- Listen To Criticism
Barb Rosensock said, “If you want a traditionally published book, you must WELCOME critiques and LISTEN.”
Share your work with your critique group or trusted readers outside your family and friends. She advised picking people who are kind and challenging. LISTEN to their critiques. Don’t defend or explain. This doesn’t mean you have to do everything they say, but listen and consider their feedback.

She reminded us that we need criticism to make our stories better. We are trying to put out a good product because in the end, publishing books is a business.
#2- Write for Kids
Jonah Heller, editor at Peachtree Publishing, reminded us over and over again to WRITE FOR KIDS. He said #1 importance for him is that a manuscript is CHILD-CENTRIC.

This seems obvious, right? Well, we are adults and it is REALLY easy to forget. In fact, I just wrote a manuscript a couple of weeks ago that my critique partner took one look at and said, “Why would a kid care about this”? Good question. They probably won’t. It was a picture book for adults.
#3- Three Reasons You Receive a Rejection

Barb broke down the reasons we are rejected into three simple categories.
#1- Marketability: Back to her earlier point of writing being a business, your book needs a place in the marketplace, it needs to be fresh and new.
#2- Quality issues: Not well written, No emotional heft behind the story “So What?”, Not enough action, Not a compelling voice, Doesn’t make sense, bad rhyme, etc.
#3- Subjectivity: This comes down to personal taste. If the agent/publisher likes your work. She said, “Once work meets quality & marketability standards, there will be someone who wants your work.”
#4- Comedic Rule of 3

One way Cate Berry suggested to add humor to a manuscript is through the comedic rule of three. You introduce a joke. Then you validate it. Then you violate it. This was one of her many great tips on writing funnier manuscripts.
#5- Illustrators are Cool

Pretty sure I already knew they were cooler, but it is always a good reminder. Don’t put in art notes if you can avoid it, leave illustrators half the story to tell, and always be grateful and acknowledge their work and contributions.
Keep Writing
I continue to work on my picture book manuscripts. Soon I will be submitting to a few agents and small publishing companies. Wish me luck!
If you are on your own writing journey, best wishes from me to you!
Jamie Bills
Thanks for the tips! Good luck with your picture books. We follow your Instagram account and always enjoy it. You’re so friendly. 😊❤️
Awww, thanks for stopping by and for your kind comment. I am glad we found each other through Instagram. 🙂
Jamie this is really great. I am so new at this and love the summarized notes. Do you have someone critique before you write your manuscript? Or generally after by the editor?
I am part of two critique groups right now, plus I have another writing friend that we critique each other’s work. I think it depends on each manuscript you write, but one manuscript I am querying now has been critiqued and revised about 20 times. Another one was more straightforward and only took about 10 revisions to get it to a point I am comfortable sending it off. Hopefully this is helpful.
Jamie, thank you for sharing these tips. They’re such helpful reminders of what to do, and not do, as a picture book author.
You are welcome Maria! You could teach a course on being a picture book author!
Hi Jamie-
Just discovered your blog. Great posts!
Diana (Bookworm Kids)
Thank you so much Diana!